Critique This!

I need my peeps to provide some input on this would-be book jacket back, the description of the third novel, Lost and Found. Just read it, then use the comment window below to tell it like it is. Would it make you curious? Would it make you purchase? Does it confuse you any?

Thanks in advance.

Now, on with the show:

All is lost. After five years of destruction and chaos, a brainwashed world careens towards annihilation. An unlikely cast of characters pulls it together with bootstrapped tech on borrowed time to beat back corporate giants and contain the mindless mob. It’s the fight of their lives in this near-future sci-fi thriller.

Ashley Winston’s lost it all--her lover, her reputation, and her empire. Rival corporations have stolen and weaponized the Rainmakers, her father’s airships. She can’t resist a good fight, and for her and her ragtag crew, this is The Good Fight. How can they win against the infinite resources of an emerging teleportation corporate giant, the Port Authority?

If Winston fails, this showdown in Wyoming will establish one iron-fisted powerhouse to rule them all. Laramie locals and Eat the Rich rebels join the fray. Already impossible odds just get worse when the fight draws unwarranted attention from the future. Relentless, no quarter warriors descend by the dozen. These time traveling huntsmen will stop at nothing to get the results they came for.

Surviving all this in the shadow of a Lightning’s Hand seems less likely with every chapter. 

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