Novel 5 jacket blurb

I’m going to provide the evolution of a book jacket blurb. Here’s the first one…Attempting to work up a book description with YA leanings, I think I revised all the Jarvis out of this:

Imagine waking up in a hospital bed with no memories and a mind-blowing ability: you can teleport! That’s Kai Riddle's reality, but his awesome power makes him a target. A powerful corporation, TransCorp, wants to turn him into a weapon. He’s also pursued by the "Televangelists" and obsessed fans who believe he's a god.

Kai’s journey to uncover his past takes him from a hidden community of “Librarians” who collect information about him to a futuristic city controlled by corporations and even to the brutal arena of the Spectacle, a televised bloodsport where Televangelists battle to the death.

Can Kai escape the clutches of TransCorp and the Televangelists? Can he master his abilities and discover the truth about who he is? Or will he be forced to fulfill the dangerous prophecy that surrounds him?

Join Kai on a thrilling adventure through time and discover his destiny!